英语书面表达典型错误及点拨

1. 误：Remember to point out where are you from and how long have you been in China.

正：Remember to point out where you are from and how long you have been in China.

点拨：从句要用陈述句语序。

2. 误：It is suggested to give a self-introduction.

正: It is suggested that you (should) give a self-introduction.

点拨：没有 “It is suggested to do”的句型，可以用 “It is suggested that...” 句型。

4. 误：Second, you should write about what you saw or listened in China.

正：Secondly, you should write about what you saw or heard in China.

点拨： “listen”是不及物动词，不能加宾语。

5. 误：In addition, you are suggested to describe your experiences in China.

正：In addition, you are advised to describe your experiences in China.

点拨：我们不能说 “sb be suggested to do” 可以用 “be advised to do”。如果我们想表达 “建议某人做某事”我们可以说“suggest sb doing” 或 “suggest one’s doing” 或 “advise sb to do”,而不能说 “suggest sb to do”

6. 误: I’m writing to tell the requests of it.

正：I’m writing to tell the requirements of it.

点拨： “request”强调“请求”，require 强调 “要求”，根据事业、需要或纪律、法律等提出的要求要用 “require”, 它的名词形式是 “requirement”。

7. 误：I’m glad to hear that you intend to join the activity whose theme is “China in Progress”.

正：I’m going to join in the activity whose theme is “China in Progress”.

点拨：如果我们想表达 “加入某项活动”，要用的结构是 “ join (sb) in an activity”。

8. 误：Last but not least, you may as well conclude it with the influence that China has made on you.

正：Last but not least, you may as well conclude it with the influence that China has on you.

点拨：如果想表达“对某人/某事物有影响”，要用 “have effect/influence on sb/sth”的结构。

9. 误：Last but not least, the influence on you should be appeared in you article.

正：Last but not least, the influence on you should appear in your article.

点拨： “appear”是不及物动词，没有被动语态。

10. 误：Knowing that you have the willing to participate in the activity, I feel it a great privilege(特权；优惠，荣幸) to give you a hand.

正：Knowing that you are willing to participate in the activity, I feel it a great privilege to give you a hand.

点拨： “willing”是形容词，它的名词形式是 “ willingness” 。如果想要表达“乐意做某事”，我们要用 “be willing to do”的结构。

11. 误：It's a combination with reading, reciting and comprehension.

正：It's a combination of reading, reciting and comprehension.

点拨：注意短语搭配：“combine A and/with B”；“a combination of ... ”

12. 误：This competition, which named Chinese Poetry Competition, is held by CCTV 10.

正：This competition, which was named Chinese Poetry Competition, is held by CCTV 10.

或： This competition named Chinese Poetry Competition is held by CCTV 10.

或：This competition whose name is Chinese Poetry Competition is held by CCTV 10.

点拨：写句子的时候，一定要注意逻辑上的主被动关系。

13. 误：You will recite many poetries according to some information.

正：You will recite many poems according to some clues.

点拨：“poetry ”是诗歌的总称，是不可数名词，不能用复数。

14. 误：There is a good news that the Chinese Poetry Competition will he held.

正：There is a good piece of news that Chinese Poetry Competition will be held.

点拨：“news”是不可数名词，如果想表达“一条消息”，我们要用“a piece of good news”。

15. 误：It is no doubt that the theme of this competition is Chinese poetry.

正：There is no doubt that the theme of this competition is Chinese poetry.

点拨：要牢记举行“There is no doubt that...”“It is no wonder that...”。

16. 误：I'd appreciate it if you could receive my invitation.

正：I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.

点拨：“receive”表示“客观收到”；“accept”表示“主观接受”。

17. Who knows more about poems will win the competition.

正：Anyone who knows more abundant poems will win the competition.

或：Those who know more abundant poems will win the competition.

或：Whoever knows more abundant poems will win the competition.

点拨：“who”引导主语从句带有疑问的含义，而“whoever”“Those who”“Anyone who”可以表达肯定的含义，表示“任何人”。

18. 误：I wish you are able to make a good job in it.

正：I wish you were able to do a good job in it.

或：I hope you are able to do a good job in it.

点拨: “wish”后的从句要用虚拟语气；“hope”后的宾语从句不需要用虚拟。

19. The main contents are following.

正：The main contents are as follows.

点拨：用 “as follows”表示 “如下”，它可以用作状语，也可以用作表语。

20. At the same time, there are one hundred people answer the same question.

正： At the same time, there are one hundred people who answer the same question.

或： At the same time, there are one hundred people answering the same question.

点拨：英文中，一句话只能有一个主要的谓语动词。