高考英语书面表达高分套路

书信 / 电邮的三段式结构

I. 开头段：四大内容 (1、问候；2、自我介绍；3、写信缘由；4、写信目的。)；

II. 中间段：具体问题 (主题句) +具体分析 (拓展句)；

III. 结尾段：客套话。

经典套话 / 套路集锦

I. 开头段：

1、问候。

How are you doing? / How is everything going?

2、自我介绍。

由于我们在考场上的身份几乎每年都是李华，李华的个人情况是可以由自己设定。如：I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old boy studying in … senior high school. / I am Li Hua, who ...

我们可以用上一些能给阅卷老师留下深刻印象的词汇，如：hardworking, diligent, optimistic, positive, helpful, take part in … competition, won the … prize in … competition, worked as a volunteer …等等。

3、写信缘由。

I heard that ... / My teacher told me ... / I am informed that ... / I learned that ... / I read in your newspaper / website that ... / You said in your last letter that ...   

4、写信目的。

最常见书信 / 电邮的“写信目的”的最佳表述：

自荐信：Now, I am writing to apply for the job / position.  

感谢信：Now, I am writing to show / express my deep gratitude to you.  

邀请信：Now, I am writing to invite you to ... (as our guest / judge / instructor).  

建议信：Now, I am writing to give you a hand / some suggestions that may help you.

求助信：Now, I am writing to ask you for help / to do me a favor.   

道歉信：Now, I am writing to show / express my sincere apology to you.  

告知信 / 通知：Now, I am writing to tell you about the details / activities / events.

II. 中间段：

自荐信

写自己的优势：

① There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position / job. To begin with, ... Moreover, ... What’s more, ... Finally, ...

k I have three main advantages. First and most important, ... Additionally, ... Last but not least, ... 

l I have the confidence that I can handle the … Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly, ...

感谢信

感激 + 对方做的事件 + 再次表示感激 / 邀请：

① I would like you to know how much your … (指对方所给予的帮助等) meant to me. I not only enjoyed … (对方给予帮助的反应一), but also … (对方给予帮助的反应二). I shall ever remember … as one of the most … in my life.

② Every time I … (看照片、录像、日记), I just can’t help thinking of you / what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to … (指对方做的事件一). Besides, you … (指对方做的事件二). Actually, I shall always remember … (指对方做的事件三) ... (表述对方所做事件对你的意义).

邀请信

描述活动主题、意义、地点、时间、参加者、期望及其它事项。

Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, +活动主题或活动目的. Moreover, +活动的地点和时间. What’s more, +活动人员、活动内容等. Finally, +期望愿景.

建议信

先表达对对方肯定的看法，再写给对方的具体建议。

① I think it is good to … But here are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ... Moreover, ... What’s more, ... Finally, ...

② The following suggestions carried out, things would probably become much better. Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly, ...

求助信

描述具体需要帮助的事项：

Hopefully you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions / help on the following problems. To begin with, … (指困难一), which ... Moreover, … (指困难二). Finally, ... (指困难三) …

常用句型：

① I have trouble in doing sth.

k I find it extremely hard for me to do sth.

l Doing sth. is another terrible headache for me.   l

道歉信

一般要以记叙文的形式写出以下三个内容：

1、不能做某事的缘由：

I have been looking forward to ..., / I have already …, however, I am informed that ... / I have to …

2、对方能够谅解你的理由：

I’m sure if you were me, you would make the same choice.

3、衷心希望对方能够谅解：

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

告知信 / 通知

描述事件或活动的目的、时间、地点、形式、及参与人等。

We’re going to have interesting activities in + 地点 at +时间 on +日期.

We hope all the senior students can come and join in the activities / event.

III. 结尾段：

自荐信和竞选演讲

★ Hopefully the chance would be offered to me.

★ If chosen / elected, I would dedicate all my energy and wisdom to the ...

★ Thank you for reading my letter / listening to my speech.

★ Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to read my letter.

★ Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. / I won’t let you down.

感谢信

★ I, on behalf of my …, would like to thank you again (for what you have done).

★ I will feel greatly / deeply / truly honored and pleased if you ...

★ I am looking forward to seeing you next time!

邀请信

★ We are sincerely looking forward to your coming.

★ I would feel greatly / deeply / truly honored if you could make it.

★ Please write to me or give me a call to let me know your decision soon. Thank you.

建议信

★ Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you.

★ If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible.

★I hope you'll find these ideas useful.

求助信

★ Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.   

道歉信

★ Hopefully you would accept my sincere apologies.

书面表达示例展示：

自荐信

2015年陕西卷

Dear Ms Chen, 
      I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer. 
      I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organisational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public. 
     As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates. 
     I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. 
Looking forward to your reply. 

感谢信

Dear Tom,

     How are you doing? How time flies! I have been back to China for half a year. I miss you so much!

     Every time I catch sight of our photos taken in America, I can’t help thinking of what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to help me with my spoken English. Besides, you made me master a lot of advanced English grammar, which really surprised me. What’s more, I shall always remember you encouraged me to correct my pronunciation by enjoying American TV programs.  By the way, could you please tell me how can I get in touch with Mr. Smith? I have some learning problems to ask him. Besides, I know you are interested in the historical Chinese civilization. Why not come to China to enjoy the Spring Festival? I promise you won’t regret!

     Looking forward to your reply!  

Yours truly,  

Li Hua    

邀请信

2010年全国卷Ⅰ

Dear Ms Smith, 
     I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and the Nature”. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions. 
     I am looking forward to your reply. 
     With best wishes, 

建议信

Dear Sir or Madam,

     How are you doing? I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old high school student who is crazy about your newspaper which I have been enjoying for 5 years. There are two main reasons why I like your newspaper best. For one thing, news not only about China but also about other countries has been reported in your newspaper. For another, so many stories of famous figures are introduced, which makes your newspaper more meaningful and splendid. By the way, here is a sincere suggestion for you. Why not publish some articles on English study? I’m sure they would be rather popular.  Thank you for reading my letter in such a busy schedule. Best wishes!

Yours truly,    

Li Hua  

求助信

2011年全国卷Ⅰ

Dear Sir / Madam, 
     I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no lessons on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: Email: lihua@126.com; Phone:12345678.
     Look forward to your reply. 

道歉信

Dear Tom,  

      How is everything going? I am writing to beg your pardon for my not being able to join you for the trip to Beijing next weekend which we planned before. I have been looking forward to the trip for a long time and have done a lot of preparation. However, I am informed that the CCTV national English competition is going to be held on that day. You know that I’ve been waiting for the chance for months and thus by no means can I miss it. As a result, I cannot make it for the trip. I’m sure if you were me, you would make the same choice. I do hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Please allow me to say sorry again.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

告知信 / 通知

2014年辽宁卷