2016年浙江新高考英语写作样题——读后续写

第二节：读后续写（满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

　　A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the wayto work one day. As he walked along Park Avenuenear the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start acar. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turnedand looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stoppedand asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said.

　　“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start mycar.”

　　“Is there something I cando to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcasesin the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t betoo much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”

　　“No trouble at all. I’d beglad to help.”

　　The young man got out andtook one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase andstarted walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.

　　It was from the bank.There had been a robbery (抢劫)!

　　Park Avenue had been quieta moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and theshouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and thepassengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other,“What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.

　　Arthur, still carrying thesuitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman infront of him.

　　She looked at the suitcaseand then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” Hethought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!”

　　Arthur looked around atthe crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, hestarted to run.

　　注意：

　　1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

　　2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

　　3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

　　4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

　　Paragraph 1:

　　As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop,stop!”

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　　Paragraph 2:

　　The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur...

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　　范文（原创范文，仅供参考）

　　One possible version：

　　As he wasrunning, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!” Andalso at the moment, Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might bethe bank robber. So Arthur didn’t stop, but continued to run until hesaw ataxi.He stopped it, jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver, “Goto the police station, please. Theman shouting behind is the bank thief!’’ The taxi raced away like thewind.

　　The taxi stoppedin front of the Police Station and Arthur told the policewhat had happened. Obviously, the police had already learned about the robbery.They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside, as Arthurhad expected. Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and theother suitcase. Later, with the information, the police caught the robber. Thepolice and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot. (Words 153)

　　Another possible version：

　　As he wasrunning, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”Thinking of the way the young man had behaved, he realized the young manmight be the bank robber. So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi. Themoment he got into the taxi, he told the driver the man shouting behind was thebank thief and asked him to drive to the nearest police station. The driverfollowed what Arthur said and drove away.

　　The taxi stoppedin front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked thedriver and directly went in. Just as Arthur was describing what had happenednear the bank on the Park Avenue and reported the young man tothe police, he heard a voice outside, “Help! Help!” To the surpriseof Arthur, it was the young man. He had followed Arthur in another taxi. Itturned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were justsome clothes. Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words: 158)

　　【范文点拨】

　　原文所给关键词分类：

　　地点：Park Avenue, the bank

　　人物：The young man, people, the bank thief

　　事件：suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm,robbery, the shouts

　　在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关键词，还需要注意以下线索：

　　1. Why did the young man look worried?

　　2. What happened? But everyone had a different answer.

　　3. Arthur became frightened and without another thought, he started torun.